Tried to fix the format problem I had with the film before the crit however was unable to make it work and had to use my laptop instead of the usb. This didn’t seem to affect the finished piece to much, no comment were made about it although I will have to find out how to fix this for next time. First reaction were that it was being intrusive however after I revealed I was exploring my eyesight views changed making the work seem “panicky”I was also asked if the work was sped up as my fast moving eye seemed to make the work more panicked i was asked whoever it was important that the audience knew what it was about figured it out themselves, talking about the lens and how the eye Whitchurch is a lens it being taken by a camera lens
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